First Story

here is a preview of my first story called "the wind hunters"

Prologue

With the sky crystal blue, the sun yellow and bright, and the wind softly sailing making it easy for the harvest season as farmers gather their crops. A young girl skipped along a path which led to her home, smiling and singing a song. Her grin widen as she spotted not only her cottage, but her mother as well. She picks up a little speed as her mom turn and smile her way. Just as she was getting close it slowly became grey; the sun was block out by big grey clouds, the wind, being feared, suddenly stop. The farmers along with other people look around wondering what was happening. The little girl, suddenly feeling a strong gust of wind, looks up meeting a horrible creature

check it out and tell me what you think

here's a link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2884528/1/The_Wind_Hunters
I also have it on livejournal: http://krazylicious.livejournal.com/1516.html#cutid1